Thursday 21 November 2013

Writing using powerful words

Androcles was very EXHAUSTED.He looked around to hide and rest.
He found a cave in the rocks.He CRAWLED into it.
It was COOL and DARK inside the cave.It was PEACEFUL too.
He went to sleep.
Suddenly Androcles was woken by a loud roar.
It was a Lion.

Androcles was TERRIFIED.He was shaking with fear.

This is a little piece of writing I did in room 4 today with mrs.Sharma and Room 4.

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