Friday 8 November 2013

The lost child

Choose a picture from the following, and write a narrative story about it.




Use this picture to create a narrative story.
Remember:
  • Figurative Language
  • Sentence Lengths (short, middle, long)
  • Structure (O, P, S, R)
  • Precise (interesting) words
  • Speaking parts between characters
  • Character and Setting descriptions!


Start here:
Lily was a 2 year old girl who lived with her Mum and Dad on a farm. The  farm was very big and they had horses, pigs and cows. Lily liked to play with her pet dog, Barkery.


One day Lilly was playing with her dog Barky in the backyard. Lily threw a small ball. Barky went to get the small ball and Lilly followed. Barky saw a mud puddle so Lilly went and followed. When they were there at the mud puddle they were playing. Lily kept throwing the ball and they ended up far from home.


When they finished playing they went to look for the way back but they didn't find the way out because they were lost in the forest.  They couldn't find the way back so Barky was sniffing where to go.


So Barky finally found the way out. Mum was very happy to see Lily home safe.  She told Lily” to never follow Barky again”.

THE END.              

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