Super Typhoon Haiyan 
Use this picture to create a description.
Remember:
- Figurative Language
- Clear, detailed descriptions of people, places, events
- Adjectives, nouns, verbs
- Using your Senses - touch, smell, hear, sight, taste, emotions
- Sentence Lengths (short, middle, long)
- Precise (interesting) words
- KEEP YOUR READERS ATTENTION
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Just 4 days ago on the 10th of november 2013 there was a super typhoon that just hit the filipinos.
See
Looking around I see crushed buildings,broken cars,dead people and lots of dirty water.
I see rubbish lying everywhere and ripped up clothes flying around.
Houses smashed up turned into rubbish.
I see destroyed houses and lost families.
Hear
I hear people screaming out loud saying”where are my kids”.
People running around asking people if they know where their kids are.
Listening I hear the cries of kids crying for their parents.
Listening to people coff so sick and loud.
Hearing tin roofs rattling in the wind.
Smell
I smell the yucky air that smells like rotten bodies.
Smelling around me everything smells so yucky.
Feel
I feel so upset I just want to help because I feel like they are all going to die.
My heart is so dead I want to be dead.
Upset people because their kids might of died.
People feeling sad because their kids are missing.
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