Use this picture to create a narrative story.
Remember:
- Figurative Language
- Sentence Lengths (short, middle, long)
- Structure (O, P, S, R)
- Precise (interesting) words
- Speaking parts between characters
- Character and Setting descriptions!
Start here:
It was one spooky halloween night,where there was a lot of adults and kids dressed up in spooky costumes running from door to door asking for candy,but there is two kids named Jack and Amber.
Jack has dark brown eyes,dark black hair and tan skin.
Amber has white skin,blue eyes and brown hair.
They both are brother and sister.
Jack and Amber were out getting candy when Amber saw a big scary house.
Amber said to Jack”Jack come over here and look at this house”.
When Jack got there he said to Amber”are you sure we should go to this house”.
Amber said”yeah we should”.
Jack said”ok then”.
When they got to the front door Amber rang the doorbell.
When she rang it the door just suddenly opened but it opened by itself.
Then they heard a voice say come in if you want more candy.
Amber was scared so was Jack.
They both wanted to run but they couldn't because there shoes were super glued to the floor.
They both heaved and push but they could not move.
Then Jack thought of an idea to take their feet out of their shoes and run,but they couldn't because the harder they tried the more they would get scared.
They tried harder and harder but they still could not move.
While they moved they saw that there was a scary witch coming towards the door.
When the witch got to the door she grabbed Jack and Amber by the arm and pulled them out.
When the witch got them out she dragged them into a room that had nothing in it.
The witch locked the door and left the room.
When the witch left the room Jack found a metal pole stuck on the wall.
Jack pulled on the pole as hard as he could and then it came off.
Jack smashed the door opened and then she smashed the front door opened.
When they got out they ran away from the house and all the way home.
THE END!!!
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