Rugby World Cup 2015 Finals(All Blacks VS Australia)

On Saturday the 31st of October there was a massive event happening.It was the night of the RUGBY WORLD CUP FINALS.

All Blacks VS Australia.

In the first half the All Blacks were leading 23 - 3.

First half of the game is over and the second half starts.
All Blacks are still leading when Australia suddenly catches up.

It a tie game 17 to 17, but cause of Dan Carters drop goal All Blacks were leading.

Ma'a nonu got the ball and scored a try.

The All Blacks are leading, the game about to finish when suddenly Dan Carter gets a drop goal from the halfway line(which is in the middle of the field.)

If you missed the game then here is a video of the highlights.

At the end of the game there was a little kid who creeped pass the security guards and ran on the field, where he tried to get to Sonny Bill Williams.

The security had tackled him on the field.
The boy got up and went to Sonny Bill Williams, from there Sonny Bill Williams carried the boy back to his mother. 

To remember him Sonny Bill Williams gave that boy his GOLD MEDAL.

Here is another video of Sonny Bill Williams.

The Giants Apocalypse

This is my myth story I created. It is sort of like Jack and The Giant Slayer.
Please leave me a comment and tell me what is good and what is bad.

T.P.S Whanau Pool Picnic Day

T.P.S Whanau pool picnic day

On wednesday the 18th of February 2015 T.P.S(Tamaki Primary School)was off to the lagoon pools for a whanau picnic fun day.We had lots of fun and it was great to see all the parents that came.

It was a day where we could have a break from school and from doing lots of hard work in class.

It was sad to see that some students had to be left behind because they did not pay for the bus.

As soon as we arrived there the first thing our class did was to get our buddies and line up waiting for the school to start moving.

When we got inside the pools everyone had to get changed into their togs and sit on the grass waiting for the lifeguards, teachers to give us the rules, instructions.

Duathlon.

I choose this as one of my events because I think that at the start of the duathlon when we had to swim to the bottom of the pool and touch the number 7 and then swim to the top of the pool and touch the other number 7 the water was cold and it was hard for me to swim because I had to carry one of the short kids on my back.
Running 2km around the basin was tiring for me because that was the first time I have ever ran 2km.

I also chose this because I think that my team could work on teamwork because they left me behind and I think that there is no I in team.

Slide.

I choose this as another one of my events because the slide was one of the most fun things we did at the pools.

I liked it because going down the slide was dark and I started laughing when I donged my head on the wall.

The slide got boring because of waiting in a long line and also because we had to go down one at a time.

Free Time.

I choose this event because I think that having free time in the water was the best.

I liked it because we played rugby in the water and the ball we played with was my friends Stanley’s.

He brang a little green and black bouncey soccer ball.

Diving Boards.

The diving boards was the most fun part of the day because I got to show my talent in bombing, but before we could go on the diving boards, everyone had to swim across the water so that the teachers know who is a confident swimmer and who is not a good swimmer.

When it was my turn on the diving boards I popped a big bomb and the teacher rated it a 10 for all my bombs.

Some people were learning how to bomb and other people already knew how to bomb.

At the end of the day everyone cleaned up and got back into their uniforms and sat on the grass listening to the teachers giving the final instructions for the day, everyone got on the bus and went back to school for the end of the day.

This is a recount that I just wrote. It is about the Whanau Pool Picnic Day at the Panmure lagoon.

I hope you like it and please leave a comment.

Champion

I am a Champion.

I won fair and square.

I beat him and pounded because of how angry he made me.

I will hold these belts for ever and when I die I will give these belts to my son.

I am a winner.

I have control of the WWE universe because I am a person that strives for gold.

It’s my first time holding these belts, and I will be in the Hall of Fame.

I am the best in the world.

If you become someone strong.

Maybe you will gain all the fame.

What does back to school mean to me?

Here is my first blog post I have done for 2014.
This is post of what does back to school mean to me.

Questions about the fundraiser we did for the philippines

Narrative writing(Haunted High School)

Choose a setting to write about...

Use this picture to create a narrative story.

Remember:

• Figurative Language
• Sentence Lengths (short, middle, long)
• Structure (O, P, S, R)
• Precise (interesting) words
• Speaking parts between characters
• Character and Setting descriptions!

Start here:

It was one day in college.

There was 2 boys named Jack and Jeff.

Jeff had black hair that was sharp and he also had white skin and blue eyes.

Jack had black hair that was sharp and he also had tan skin and brown eyes.

One day Jack and Jeff went out for a walk when they walked passed a high school that looked like it was haunted.

They wanted to go into the school but they were too scared.

Jeff said to Jack”your scared to go near the school”.

Jack said”no im not”.

Jeff and Jack both went home and got a bag out with stuff they got from all over the world.

They got out a gun that said”ghost gun for sucking in ghost”.

They both left their house and went to the school.

When they got there they kicked down the wooden door and went in.

When they got in Jack was grabbed from something but the thing that grabbed him was invisible.

Jeff pulled out the ghost sucking gun and sucked the ghost in.

When the ghost was sucked in they both ran to a door that lead into a room.

In the room they could see lots of desk and other stuff floating in the air.

They opened the door and started using the ghost sucking gun.

All the stuff that was floating in the air was now smashed up on the floor.

They both ran out of the first room and into the next one.

In the next room there was more floating stuff but this time there was a little boy in the corner of the room.

He was crying but in front of him was a floating knife.

The knife was almost going to be inside of him when Jack and Jeff jumped in and sucked all the ghost in and then saved the little boy.

All the ghost was now in the ghost sucking gun and Jeff and Jack went home safely.

Jeff said to Jack”What's going to happen now.

Writing using powerful words

Androcles was very EXHAUSTED.He looked around to hide and rest.

He found a cave in the rocks.He CRAWLED into it.

It was COOL and DARK inside the cave.It was PEACEFUL too.

He went to sleep.

Suddenly Androcles was woken by a loud roar.

It was a Lion.

Androcles was TERRIFIED.He was shaking with fear.

This is a little piece of writing I did in room 4 today with mrs.Sharma and Room 4.

Super Typhoon Haiyan Description

Super Typhoon Haiyan

Use this picture to create a description.

Remember:

• Figurative Language
• Clear, detailed descriptions of people, places, events
• Adjectives, nouns, verbs
• Using your Senses - touch, smell, hear, sight, taste, emotions
• Sentence Lengths (short, middle, long)
• Precise (interesting) words
• KEEP YOUR READERS ATTENTION

Start here:

Just 4 days ago on the 10th of november 2013 there was a super typhoon that just hit the filipinos.

See

Looking around I see crushed buildings,broken cars,dead people and lots of dirty water.

I see rubbish lying everywhere and ripped up clothes flying around.

Houses smashed up turned into rubbish.

I see destroyed houses and lost families.

Hear

I hear people screaming out loud saying”where are my kids”.

People running around asking people if they know where their kids are.

Listening I hear the cries of kids crying for their parents.

Listening to people coff so sick and loud.

Hearing tin roofs rattling in the wind.

Smell

I smell the yucky air that smells like rotten bodies.

Smelling around me everything smells so yucky.

Feel

I feel so upset I just want to help because I feel like they are all going to die.

My heart is so dead I want to be dead.

Upset people because their kids might of died.

People feeling sad because their kids are missing.

The lost child

Choose a picture from the following, and write a narrative story about it.

Use this picture to create a narrative story.

Remember:

• Figurative Language
• Sentence Lengths (short, middle, long)
• Structure (O, P, S, R)
• Precise (interesting) words
• Speaking parts between characters
• Character and Setting descriptions!

Start here:

Lily was a 2 year old girl who lived with her Mum and Dad on a farm. The  farm was very big and they had horses, pigs and cows. Lily liked to play with her pet dog, Barkery.

One day Lilly was playing with her dog Barky in the backyard. Lily threw a small ball. Barky went to get the small ball and Lilly followed. Barky saw a mud puddle so Lilly went and followed. When they were there at the mud puddle they were playing. Lily kept throwing the ball and they ended up far from home.

When they finished playing they went to look for the way back but they didn't find the way out because they were lost in the forest.  They couldn't find the way back so Barky was sniffing where to go.

So Barky finally found the way out. Mum was very happy to see Lily home safe.  She told Lily” to never follow Barky again”.

THE END.              

The Haunted House(Narrative

Use this picture to create a narrative story.

Remember:

• Figurative Language
• Sentence Lengths (short, middle, long)
• Structure (O, P, S, R)
• Precise (interesting) words
• Speaking parts between characters
• Character and Setting descriptions!

Start here:

It was one spooky halloween night,where there was a lot of adults and kids dressed up in spooky costumes running from door to door asking for candy,but there is two kids named Jack and Amber.

Jack has dark brown eyes,dark black hair and tan skin.

Amber has white skin,blue eyes and brown hair.

They both are brother and sister.

Jack and Amber were out getting candy when Amber saw a big scary house.

Amber said to Jack”Jack come over here and look at this house”.

When Jack got there he said to Amber”are you sure we should go to this house”.

Amber said”yeah we should”.

Jack said”ok then”.

When they got to the front door Amber rang the doorbell.

When she rang it the door just suddenly opened but it opened by itself.

Then they heard a voice say come in if you want more candy.

Amber was scared so was Jack.

They both wanted to run but they couldn't because there shoes were super glued to the floor.

They both heaved and push but they could not move.

Then Jack thought of an idea to take their feet out of their shoes and run,but they couldn't because the harder they tried the more they would get scared.

They tried harder and harder but they still could not move.

While they moved they saw that there was a scary witch coming towards the door.

When the witch got to the door she grabbed Jack and Amber by the arm and pulled them out.

When the witch got them out she dragged them into a room that had nothing in it.

The witch locked the door and left the room.

When the witch left the room Jack found a metal pole stuck on the wall.

Jack pulled on the pole as hard as he could and then it came off.

Jack smashed the door opened and then she smashed the front door opened.

When they got out they ran away from the house and all the way home.

THE END!!!

The Hunger Games

Use this picture to create a narrative story.

Remember:

• Figurative Language
• Sentence Lengths (short, middle, long)
• Structure (O, P, S, R)
• Precise (interesting) words
• Speaking parts between characters
• Character and Setting descriptions!

Start here:

Good day,my name is BJ and I am 19 years old and I have a brother called LJ who is 19 years old and we live in Queenstown.

Me and my brother are always going out to town to buy some food and clothes.

One day while we were in town there was a new shop called join the Hunger game club and help us win the war.

LJ asked me if I wanted to join with him.

I say yes.

So we go into the shop and see a man standing by a door.

LJ and I go to the man and we ask him if this is where we sign up for the Hunger games.

The man says”yes this is where you sign up”.

We go into the door and when we are in we see a long line full of people that want to join.

We wait until we get to the front of the line.

When we get to the front there is another standing in front of us.

He asks me and LJ “if we are going to join the war”.

We say”yes we are going to join”.

When we got in there was a man that passed us a gun and a armoury suit.

When we put our armoury suit on and picked up our guns we went into a door and then outside where the big war was happening.

LJ and I ran to find somewhere to hide behind and where we could shoot the other people.

When I put my head up to shoot some one I saw that we were versing the Natzis.

There was a man in the Natzi that was to bizzy shooting other people not even looking at us or shooting us.

I told LJ”that there was a Natzi behind us” and when LJ turned around the Natzi man pointed his gun at him.

I quickly picked my gun up and shot the Natzi man.

When LJ looked at me he said”thanks for saving my life BJ”.

I said”thats allright”.

When LJ put his head up to look half of the people that was on our team was dead.

LJ said to me”BJ look at this”.

When I put my head up to look.

My heartfelt dead and my eyes were full of tears.

My tears ran down my face and onto the ground.

I was in shock.

All the other people that survived died.

LJ told me to duck down or you will be seen and killed.

It was too late,there was a Natzi soliger standing in front of us.

He told the other Natzi that he found the last two survivors.

When the other Natzi came LJ told me to run home.

I felt like running,but I couldn't because I did not want LJ to die.

LJ told me to run again but this time in a deeper voice.

I listened to LJ and the only way I could get free was by biting the Natzi man in the arm.

I bit the Natzi in the arm and ran out the back door and out the 3 other doors me and LJ came in.

When I got out I ran as fast as I could go.

When I got home I ran straight to my room and started crying on my bead.

When the war was over I would never see LJ again.

While I was making breakfast LJ came running to me.

LJ said to me”WHAT'S NEXT”.