Narrative writing(Haunted High School)

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Use this picture to create a narrative story.

Remember:

• Figurative Language
• Sentence Lengths (short, middle, long)
• Structure (O, P, S, R)
• Precise (interesting) words
• Speaking parts between characters
• Character and Setting descriptions!

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It was one day in college.

There was 2 boys named Jack and Jeff.

Jeff had black hair that was sharp and he also had white skin and blue eyes.

Jack had black hair that was sharp and he also had tan skin and brown eyes.

One day Jack and Jeff went out for a walk when they walked passed a high school that looked like it was haunted.

They wanted to go into the school but they were too scared.

Jeff said to Jack”your scared to go near the school”.

Jack said”no im not”.

Jeff and Jack both went home and got a bag out with stuff they got from all over the world.

They got out a gun that said”ghost gun for sucking in ghost”.

They both left their house and went to the school.

When they got there they kicked down the wooden door and went in.

When they got in Jack was grabbed from something but the thing that grabbed him was invisible.

Jeff pulled out the ghost sucking gun and sucked the ghost in.

When the ghost was sucked in they both ran to a door that lead into a room.

In the room they could see lots of desk and other stuff floating in the air.

They opened the door and started using the ghost sucking gun.

All the stuff that was floating in the air was now smashed up on the floor.

They both ran out of the first room and into the next one.

In the next room there was more floating stuff but this time there was a little boy in the corner of the room.

He was crying but in front of him was a floating knife.

The knife was almost going to be inside of him when Jack and Jeff jumped in and sucked all the ghost in and then saved the little boy.

All the ghost was now in the ghost sucking gun and Jeff and Jack went home safely.

Jeff said to Jack”What's going to happen now.

The lost child

Choose a picture from the following, and write a narrative story about it.

Use this picture to create a narrative story.

Remember:

• Figurative Language
• Sentence Lengths (short, middle, long)
• Structure (O, P, S, R)
• Precise (interesting) words
• Speaking parts between characters
• Character and Setting descriptions!

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Lily was a 2 year old girl who lived with her Mum and Dad on a farm. The  farm was very big and they had horses, pigs and cows. Lily liked to play with her pet dog, Barkery.

One day Lilly was playing with her dog Barky in the backyard. Lily threw a small ball. Barky went to get the small ball and Lilly followed. Barky saw a mud puddle so Lilly went and followed. When they were there at the mud puddle they were playing. Lily kept throwing the ball and they ended up far from home.

When they finished playing they went to look for the way back but they didn't find the way out because they were lost in the forest.  They couldn't find the way back so Barky was sniffing where to go.

So Barky finally found the way out. Mum was very happy to see Lily home safe.  She told Lily” to never follow Barky again”.

THE END.              

The Haunted House(Narrative

Use this picture to create a narrative story.

Remember:

• Figurative Language
• Sentence Lengths (short, middle, long)
• Structure (O, P, S, R)
• Precise (interesting) words
• Speaking parts between characters
• Character and Setting descriptions!

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It was one spooky halloween night,where there was a lot of adults and kids dressed up in spooky costumes running from door to door asking for candy,but there is two kids named Jack and Amber.

Jack has dark brown eyes,dark black hair and tan skin.

Amber has white skin,blue eyes and brown hair.

They both are brother and sister.

Jack and Amber were out getting candy when Amber saw a big scary house.

Amber said to Jack”Jack come over here and look at this house”.

When Jack got there he said to Amber”are you sure we should go to this house”.

Amber said”yeah we should”.

Jack said”ok then”.

When they got to the front door Amber rang the doorbell.

When she rang it the door just suddenly opened but it opened by itself.

Then they heard a voice say come in if you want more candy.

Amber was scared so was Jack.

They both wanted to run but they couldn't because there shoes were super glued to the floor.

They both heaved and push but they could not move.

Then Jack thought of an idea to take their feet out of their shoes and run,but they couldn't because the harder they tried the more they would get scared.

They tried harder and harder but they still could not move.

While they moved they saw that there was a scary witch coming towards the door.

When the witch got to the door she grabbed Jack and Amber by the arm and pulled them out.

When the witch got them out she dragged them into a room that had nothing in it.

The witch locked the door and left the room.

When the witch left the room Jack found a metal pole stuck on the wall.

Jack pulled on the pole as hard as he could and then it came off.

Jack smashed the door opened and then she smashed the front door opened.

When they got out they ran away from the house and all the way home.

THE END!!!

The Hunger Games

Use this picture to create a narrative story.

Remember:

• Figurative Language
• Sentence Lengths (short, middle, long)
• Structure (O, P, S, R)
• Precise (interesting) words
• Speaking parts between characters
• Character and Setting descriptions!

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Good day,my name is BJ and I am 19 years old and I have a brother called LJ who is 19 years old and we live in Queenstown.

Me and my brother are always going out to town to buy some food and clothes.

One day while we were in town there was a new shop called join the Hunger game club and help us win the war.

LJ asked me if I wanted to join with him.

I say yes.

So we go into the shop and see a man standing by a door.

LJ and I go to the man and we ask him if this is where we sign up for the Hunger games.

The man says”yes this is where you sign up”.

We go into the door and when we are in we see a long line full of people that want to join.

We wait until we get to the front of the line.

When we get to the front there is another standing in front of us.

He asks me and LJ “if we are going to join the war”.

We say”yes we are going to join”.

When we got in there was a man that passed us a gun and a armoury suit.

When we put our armoury suit on and picked up our guns we went into a door and then outside where the big war was happening.

LJ and I ran to find somewhere to hide behind and where we could shoot the other people.

When I put my head up to shoot some one I saw that we were versing the Natzis.

There was a man in the Natzi that was to bizzy shooting other people not even looking at us or shooting us.

I told LJ”that there was a Natzi behind us” and when LJ turned around the Natzi man pointed his gun at him.

I quickly picked my gun up and shot the Natzi man.

When LJ looked at me he said”thanks for saving my life BJ”.

I said”thats allright”.

When LJ put his head up to look half of the people that was on our team was dead.

LJ said to me”BJ look at this”.

When I put my head up to look.

My heartfelt dead and my eyes were full of tears.

My tears ran down my face and onto the ground.

I was in shock.

All the other people that survived died.

LJ told me to duck down or you will be seen and killed.

It was too late,there was a Natzi soliger standing in front of us.

He told the other Natzi that he found the last two survivors.

When the other Natzi came LJ told me to run home.

I felt like running,but I couldn't because I did not want LJ to die.

LJ told me to run again but this time in a deeper voice.

I listened to LJ and the only way I could get free was by biting the Natzi man in the arm.

I bit the Natzi in the arm and ran out the back door and out the 3 other doors me and LJ came in.

When I got out I ran as fast as I could go.

When I got home I ran straight to my room and started crying on my bead.

When the war was over I would never see LJ again.

While I was making breakfast LJ came running to me.

LJ said to me”WHAT'S NEXT”.

My Narrative Writing

Start here:It was one sunny day samoa where there was one 24 year old adult and one 13 year old boy.

There names were Jake and Sharon.

In samoa while Sharon was taking Jake out for a swim they heard a terrible sound of buildings crashing down and people screaming running towards the underground cave.

When Sharon and Jake looked around the corner of a building they saw that there was a GIGANTIC monster mouth eating TSUNAMI rushing towards them.

Sharon told Jake to follow her to the underground cave so that they would not die.

Sharon and Jake were running so fast that Jake fell over.

When Jake fell over Sharon quickly stopped and picked up Jake and put him on her shoulders.

While Sharon was running with Jake on her shoulders she saw that there was another TSUNAMI rushing at them.

When Sharon stopped Jake woke up and jumped off Sharons shoulders and when Jake was standing he said to Sharon”that there was a book I was reading and it was about how to escape a TSUNAMI”.

Sharon said to Jake”how do you escape one then”.

Jake said”look for a building that has a broken wall”.

While they were looking for broken wall Jake saw one and told Sharon to follow him.

Sharon follow him and when they got into the broken wall they were safe,but then they heard a sound.

It sounded like the TSUNAMI trying to destroy them.

Sharon said to Jake”lets go out the same whole we came in”.

Jake said”ok then”.

They both ran out and got away.

When they got out they ran to the underground cave.

They made it to the cave and they were also safe.

The next day they came out and looked around.

Jake said to Sharon”WHAT'S NEXT!”.

The end.

Athletics day(T4 W2)

O:One day we had athletics at school.

My mum and dad came to watch us race.

When it came to lunch time I had lots of fun talking and playing with my friends and also telling them that they did well in their races.

When lunch time was over everyone had to go back to their house colours and then while we were watching kids race we heard a song come on and a little boy from our team named joshua went up the front and started dancing.

We all had a giggle.

While we were watching the races 1 of our leaders came over and took some people on to the racing tracks to start the relays race.

We won the relay races.

When she got back up everyone had a little giggle and then after that we all went home.

P:I did not race because I knew that I was gonna come last.

So the only thing I did while I was watching my friends and other race was cheering them on so that they could win.

My friends were asking me why I did not race.

I told them why and they said that it was alright and that they would hope that I was gonna race in the next ones.

In the end there was a teachers race.

Our teacher miss. Manuyag got bumped off and she went flying.

The 400 meter races looked hard.

S:When she got back up everyone had a little giggle and then after that we all went home.