Thursday 16 August 2012

Cavhyon-loni-isaaka-willy narritive

One great, sunny bright morning. Isaka, Willy and Loni were playing soccer on the road. They were using a can as their soccer ball. All you could hear was the metal sound of the can being kicked and scraped hard on the ground. Loni has blond hair, green eyes, tan brown skin and cherry cheeks. He is intelligent at selling fruit. His friend Willy always acts like the boss when they are together. He is kind of like a nerd because he is brainy at solving hard maths problems and he can read hard books. Isaaka is the manager amongst them. One day they were walking to the beach. On the way to the beach they saw a house with lots of fruit trees.The house is blue and it has a treehouse in a tree on the left and a green and white fence with some yellow and blue flowers. They saw bananas,apples,pears and cherry fruit trees. They decided to pick the fruit from the trees in the basket they had with them. When they got what they wanted they sped off quickened. They then decided to sell the fruit at the beach so that they could get money for food shopping. On their way to the beach they did not notice that there was a hole in their basket.So they decided to go back and find their fruit. When they found it they had noticed that the cows from the farm had eaten their fruit. “Oh no look what happened to our delicious fruit”?. Those cows have eaten our fruit that we picked from that house we saw. I want to get my revenge on those cows because they ate our lovely fruit. The end.

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