I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kia Manawanui syndicate and my teachers are Ms Aireen and Whaea Petra.
Monday, 29 October 2012
I hear a whisper but no one was there...
It Was one dark scary night 2 boys that was 10 and 11 namEd KravEn and Kini.
KravEn had aqua EyEs blue hair and whitE skin
Kini had aqua EyEs green hair and whitE skin
On night they in their beds reading books when suddenly they heard a bang “Kraven said it camE from down stair”.
So when Kini went with Kraven to check on who was down stair’ no one was there until they went into the kitchen the window was smashed and the fridge door was open and then once again they heard a scream it came from in the sitting room when they got in there the lights was swing back and fords they and then the next thing you know there was whispering but no one was there until Kraven saw a demon and said “ahhh there is a demon behind you Kini.
Then the next thing you know Kini fell straight to the ground the demon was gone because the sun was and Kraven was staring at Kini and then Kraven started crying and then Kinis friend came over and knocked on the door Kraven went and open the door it was Joaquin he came and was standing by the door he dropped his bags and started crying and that was when Joaquins mum was just leaving when Kraven stopped her car and told her to come and have a look inside when she got inside she called the police and the ambulance they came in 2 minutes and took Kini to the hospital he wasn't breathing but his eyes were still open eyes and the mum and dad came in “said move out of my way....
And that is why you should never live in a huge house like Kini and Kravens house...
Friday, 26 October 2012
Wednesday, 24 October 2012
Narrative Writing -Playing
When they were playing soccer Joaquin kicked the ball over to the doghouse and Rex got all angry and pushed him so at school “Rex said that he was going to smash Joaquin and Joaquin said I don't care”.
So after school Rex was getting ready to give Joaquin a hiding and that was when the teacher came out and said what is all of this noise then she screamed and ran back in the classroom and when Joaquin was coming out of class he ran all the way home and Rex did not see him at all so when Rex came out he “said where's Joaquin and they all said he ran home”.
So Rex was waiting for him in the morning at but Joaquin did not come to school there was a note saying that Joaquin was leaving to go play in soccer champions were there was a lot of people and he was playing in Canada.
Rex was so angry that he wanted to go to Joaquin’s room and break everything in his room but there was nothing in his room only the spider man poster that he had left for Rex.
Friday, 19 October 2012
My first V-log about energy
This is about the topic that we are learning this term -Energy
My Holiday In Whangarei
In the second week of my holiday’s me and my uncle drove up to whangarei in his aqua car that looked like the sky.
On the way up me and my uncle stopped at the gas station and got us something to eat.
when we got there my grandad was just getting home from the supermarket.
I felt very excited to see him because I had never seen him for a long time.
On the next day my grandad took me to the movies to watch the muppets.
I thought the movie was very funny because I like the part when a green furry frog put on fart shoes.
On sunday morning my uncle came and picked me up and took me home it was a long but when we got home my mum was waiting to take us to get a tattoo for my uncle.
I had the best holiday in the world.
On the way up me and my uncle stopped at the gas station and got us something to eat.
when we got there my grandad was just getting home from the supermarket.
I felt very excited to see him because I had never seen him for a long time.
On the next day my grandad took me to the movies to watch the muppets.
I thought the movie was very funny because I like the part when a green furry frog put on fart shoes.
On sunday morning my uncle came and picked me up and took me home it was a long but when we got home my mum was waiting to take us to get a tattoo for my uncle.
I had the best holiday in the world.
The Stairs
When she was going to play on the stairs she did not notice that she had not tied her shoes up and she saw a spider on the stair and screamed spider ahhh get that spider away I don't like poisonous spider i'm allergic to so she fainted and slipped down the stairs and broke her leg and she started crying but nobody in her house could hear her until the morning.
So the next morning she was found at the bottom of the stairs with the black spider poisoning her back and her whole body even her mouth and nose and her head.
So her family took her to the hospital and tried to bring her back to life but they couldn't and so she died.
So when they had her funeral her family started crying and then before the uncle left she said “uncle and the uncle said who is that and when he turned around she was sitting up and the uncle said she survived and they all were happy.
So that is why kids, you should never play on the stairs like that.
Thursday, 18 October 2012
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