Friday 23 August 2013

Simba versus Scar



Simba was the greatest king in the wild. He had the powers to control all of the animals but the only animal he could not control was Scar, his brother and Scar’s EVIL GANG. He had kids. They were noisy and didn’t listen to their parents.
One day when Simba called them to eat, there was no reply.  So he called them again, but they didn't come to him. Simba was worried. He could feel his heart was beating fast, like a car. He called to his wife, “I am going out to find Shenzi,Rafiki and Vuka.” Simba ran to look for his kids  - he looked high on the mountains and on top of the rocks but he couldn’t  find them. As he ran home, he saw that all the animals were standing outside his house, at the bottom of pride rock. So he called to them, ”Where are my kids?” Then in a loud voice an animal called back saying, ”It was Scar - your EVIL brother who took your kids!” Simba asked the loud animal, “Which way did they go?” Then the loud voice spoke back - ”Scar took them back to his base and he told us to tell you that if you want your kids back you will have to take an army of girl and boy animals but only the strong ones and you will also have to fight him for the king spot.”

So Simba took his time to get his army ready and make plans.When he got his plan and army ready he said, “I will return and I will stay as king because Scar knows I am STRONGER than him.”when Simba and his army got to Scar, Scar said, “Let the fight begin.” They started fighting and lots of Simbas and Scars armies died because of Scar and Simba fighting through their armies trying to reach each other to battle for the kings spot.When they got to each other to fight, they had a good look around to see if they still had an army but all they could see was dead animals lying on the ground with lots of blood pouring out.

Then Simba took the first attack on Scar and when Scar looked at Simba he had a red face and there was blood coming out of his mouth. Simba explained  to Scar, “I am stronger than you and because you are lying on the floor. I will finally finish this fight and I will still be king”.

Before Simba ended the fight Scar smooched to Simba, “Can we just be friends?” Simba was thinking in his mind ‘Should I be friends with him or should I not be friends with him and just finish the match and go home as king?’When Simba ended the fight with Scar he ended it by biting Scar and then in a flash Simba saw a fire and thought, ‘Should I throw Scar into the fire or should I let him live?’ One part of Simba’s brain was saying “Throw him in the fire!” and the other part of Simbas brain was saying “Let Scar live!” So then Simba had to pick one part of his brain to listen to.When Simba made his mind up he answered back to Scar saying, “Sorry, but I have to throw you in the fire because I am going to listen to my brain that told me to throw you in the fire.” Simba put Scar into the fire and ended the fight.

When Simba got back, all of the animals were still standing there and when he got home he saw that his kids were back at home.Simba was glad to see his kids back at home and when Simba and his wife and his kids walked outside onto the rocks Simba told them that Scar is dead and he will not bother us any more.

When Simba told them this, they clapped their hands and cheered on Simba, the great king. Simba was glad that the war was over and peace was back in the wild.
They lived happily ever after.

The End.

1 comment:

  1. WOW!!! Cavyon that work was the mosted beautiful work ever. I like the way you used your characters and described the story.I think the only thing you need to work on is add some more detail when you are describing your story.But yea keep it up.
    @wesome Work.

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